Thursday, 3 January 2013

Book Review: 'The Haj' by Leon Uris

Independently of the book challenges I've set myself for 2013 (by the way, Happy New Year!) - the Off The Shelf challenge, which has been updated for the new year; the Goodreads 2013 Reading Challenge, and the Literary Exploration 2013 Challenge (in which I'm reading 36 books) -  I've read recently on the recommendation of a friend Leon Uris' novel The Haj, an Arabian epic nestled within the conflict between Israel and Palestine.


The Haj by Leon Uris

I was recommended to read this book by my friend when I asked him, in a conversation about politics and current affairs, what made the Middle East a particular hotspot for violence - at the time, the news broadcasts were showing images of Hamas bombings and grieving shrouded women in Israel. I wasn't very far into the novel when I realised why this book was recommended - it seems to have all the answers to my questions about the conflict in that area, which I'd heard so much about but never really understood what the motives were. We hear about the Gaza Strip and the West Bank but the war there is never really explained on the news, and I guess people of my generation who haven't grown up with that conflict in the centre of foreign affairs just don't have a good grasp on it, unless we research it for ourselves. This was my situation before reading The Haj and though I know it's a fictional novel, it gives a pretty good springboard into the essence of the Israeli-Palestinian conflict, and even the events that I'm more familiar with, like 9/11 and the resurgence of Islam.

The narrator in the novel is Ishmael, the son of Haj Ibrahim who is the main character and around whom most of the action takes place, though there are fair chunks of the novel where the narration is third-person and Ishmael is not present (makes for some confusing reading every now and then when Ishmael pops up again to speak through the fourth wall). The narrative follows Haj Ibrahim's life from his promotion to muktar of his village of Tabah, through the beginnings of the Israeli-Palestinian conflict in the wake of the World Wars, to his eventual demise as an Arab refugee, disenfranchised by his people and his culture. It's a very bleak story, reinforced only by the musings on Islamic culture which locks Haj Ibrahim into a situation that he is desperate to escape and that does nothing for the advancement of his people in the face of the Jewish opposition. Every now and then there is a glimmer of hope that certain characters would wake up to themselves and take the opportunities given to them to better their lives, but those hopes are always doused by things like honour and duty that seems to form the basis of the Arabic and Islamic way of life. The main female character - in as much as she is a "main" character - goes some way to breaking the shackles of her downtrodden life as a woman in the Arab world, but what seems to be the natural order of things catches up to her as well and I hate to think - but know it happens - that her story is one echoed throughout the Middle East, and even in the Western World where I think most of us would assume this sort of thing doesn't happen (perhaps not as publicly, which is a real shame because it continues the violence rather than condones it). 

The read itself is not bad, apart from the frequent shifts in narrator - the plot is easy to follow and most of the characters are easily identifiable, though at times the subject matter becomes very dark and can be a struggle to get through, especially the rapes and the killings. My biggest gripe with the novel from a stylistic perspective is the very end of the novel, where the narrator Ishmael, consumed by grief and guilt about how his life has turned out, becomes delusional and his narration wanders off into barely connected, bland gibberish for about three pages, and then the novel ends. After the 500 pages that precede it, the ending is very weak and is almost a cop out, in many ways, almost as if the author couldn't decide what to do next and simply decided to let the story taper off to nothing. I though it was a pretty disappointing conclusion to what was an interesting novel; I think it would have been better if we'd seen Ishmael in the epilogue speaking to us from his living room as he dictates his memoir or from a mental institution if one wanted to keep the theme of insanity - the lackluster end is made even more disappointing by the nothingness that Ishmael ultimately becomes. 

Despite the poor ending and the sometimes brutal scenes involving the female characters, I would recommend the book and I'm glad to have read it, though I would like to read others like it before saying whether or not it's a must-read about the Israeli-Palestinian conflict or even an insight into Arab/Islamic culture. 

Out of Five:
3 out of 5 stars

Sunday, 2 December 2012

New Month, New Reading Challenge

But this one's got no time limit, no specific amount of books to read - just a casual list that I know I'll be able to get through, because this challenge is based on the tomes I have in my own little library already: the book list is what's already on the shelves in my bookcase.


I'm basing this off the challenge hosted by Bookish Ardour, for which I'm about twelve months late, but that doesn't matter. The goal here is to read all the books in my bookshelf, whether I've read them before or not, and post the reviews here on this blog as I go. The quirk in this will be that, because I've ordered the books on my bookshelf in alphabetical order, I'll be reading and posting in that order too - just a bit of OCD to round out the reading challenge!

So, that means that the first book I'll be plucking off the shelf is Monica Ali's Alentejo Blue (2006).


Friday, 30 November 2012

NaNoWriMo Day 30

Bad news...


...


... I have a headache. 

I got it while typing away furiously at my laptop trying to smash out 4k more to try and hit the 50k target for today, the last day of NaNoWriMo (in Adelaide, anyway).




The good news, though, is that I made it to 50k.

And had my novel validated by the NaNoWriMo website - 50k.

This means I'm officially a NaNoWriMo WINNER!!


Finally, I've achieved what I've set out to do on a project for once - I'm met the aims of NaNoWriMo and written half a novel in 30 days. But not only have I made the (what some might call arbitrary) word count target of 50,000 words, I've also achieved the most important goal of the project, and that was to kick-start a novel - and despite the ups and downs I've had in the last month while writing it, I'm feeling pretty good about the story so far (it's nowhere near finished - but that can wait until a bit later. Right now, I need a rest...)!

For more info about the novel itself, head over to my NaNoWriMo profile page, which I'll be updating in the next day or so (after a decent sleep...!)

And just to cap off the winner's feeling, here's a few screenshots from the last couple of nights:


This was me last night, floating around the 46k mark with a big day ahead to finish.


This was the stats page at the last count, 50k+ - I'd been behind just about all the way, but came back strong!


Validation! I could have just copy-pasted some Wikipedia articles and "said" that I'd written 50,000 words, but really, where's the satisfaction in that?

And now, back to your regularly scheduled programme...


Thursday, 29 November 2012

NaNoWriMo Day 29

The Penultimate Day.

I'm inches away from the daily target.

It's almost ten to midnight.

On a weeknight.

I have 3,983 words to go.

I wrote 4,874 words today. 

It helped that my other half was out working half the night (don't tell him that).

If I have another night like I did tonight, I can make it to 50k by midnight November 30.

But if I keep going into the night, I could knock some of that off...

... and be zonked for work the next day.

Decisions, decisions...!


(92%.... 92%!!!)

Tuesday, 27 November 2012

NaNoWriMo Day 27

At 11:01pm tonight I have a total of 40,465 words, a bit less than 5k behind the target, and my goal of reaching 50k by November 30 is slipping further and further away with each night that I don't have a big writing session. I have to try and squeeze out over 9,000 words in the next three days to get anywhere near the target, and I can't help but start to feel a bit of disappointment over the knowledge that I might not make it. Talk about being so close and yet so far...

But I guess I've achieved the main goal of the NaNoWriMo project in the first place, which was to start writing, the self-imposed 50k in 30 days challenge being the catalyst to this new story I've been plugging away at for the last 20-odd days (mostly nights). In the end, if I don't make the word target, then at least I'm still halfway towards something publishable, especially if I keep going with it and see it all the way to the end. I know I won't be completely satisfied with just this result if I don't make it by November 30 because I want to win (and I want a little star on my NaNo profile!), but maybe in time it'll sink in and I'll feel a bit better about all the effort I've put into it so far.

But anyway, enough gibbering - more writing!


(Thought I'd put a new widget up for the last few days, just to give myself a bit more incentive to reach the end with 50k!)

Saturday, 24 November 2012

NaNoWriMo Day 24

A good day today, though I'm buggered as I write this, having spent most of the day trying to catch up to the 40k target word count for day 24 and not having had a brilliant sleep the night before, given the taste of the impending summer we're having... still, between writing and watching the cricket and taking the required meal breaks, I managed to knock out 4,466 words in about twelve hours. That's about 378 words an hour according to my calculation, a rate of knots that I have to get revved up higher if I want to finish November with 50,000 words.

But finally, almost 35k in, I'm at a point in the story where I feel confident sharing (though only with selected beta readers, of course), and I've covered some of the more crucial plot points along the way, so I'm feeling good about the direction the rest of the novel will take. It's just a matter of finishing it now, and I've got a new daily word target to hit of 2,180 words per day if I want to make it!

Tomorrow's write-in at the SA Writer's Centre should hopefully do me some good, dedicating the entire three hours to just writing, writing, writing... but tomorrow also means that there's only five more days of NaNo to go - am I gonna make it in time???


PS - I updated the Novel section of my NaNoWriMo page, which has a sneak peek on it (although it doesn't give away very much - or does it...)!

Film Review: "007 - Skyfall"

I must preface this review by saying that when I was a blossoming pubescent girl I was a huge James Bond fan, like, I had autistic savant levels of knowledge on the 007 franchise, much to the annoyance of everyone whenever I quoted a movie or referenced a fun fact, or whenever anyone mentioned Pierce Brosnan (which still happens today, I'll be honest...)

So when I say that Skyfall is the best modern James Bond film in the canon, I really mean it.


007: Skyfall

The Plot: Daniel Craig is back as Ian Fleming's James Bond 007 in Skyfall, the 23rd adventure in the longest-running film franchise of all time. In Skyfall, Bond's loyalty to M is tested as her past comes back to haunt her. As MI6 comes under attack, 007 must track down and destroy the threat, no matter how personal the cost. [Official Website]

The Review (HERE BE SPOILERS - DO NOT READ ON IF YOU DO NOT WANT TO BE SPOILED!): 

If you have a gloss over the 'Reception' section of the Wikipedia article you'll get the gist of what I would have said if I wanted to waste a few flattering words stating the obvious/what I've already said. But probably what doesn't come across from those few nice words about the film is that it's not just a great James Bond film, it's a great film all-round (however, I think if you weren't familiar with the characters you might get a bit lost).

The thing that gets it for me is that this movie feels like an encapsulation of all that's come before it, and it pays a spectacular homage to the series as a whole that I think Die Another Day tried to do but failed, and all set in the modern age, too, which adds another dimension to the film. I'll explain what I mean: first, the main antagonist in the film is a cyber-terrorist, who in today's technological, Internet world, is a real threat, someone we can all identify with as being scary, frightening - we're afraid of what cyber-terrorists can do in real life. The throw-back to the films past with Javier Bardem's character, and I don't know if this is was intentional or coincidence, was the resemblance that at least I saw to Christopher Walken's Max Zorin in A View to a Kill (1985, starring Roger Moore for the last time as Bond). Max Zorin, like Silvia in Skyfall, is a blond, slightly off-his-rocker villain who deals with computers, more specifically microchips, and whose grand scheme is to force an earthquake through Silicon Valley so that he can have monopoly over the microchip industry. It appears that I'm not the first to make this connection, as a Google Image search for 'Max Zorin James Bond' returns results for Javier Bardem as Silvia, in dyed blond hair and eyebrows and piercing blue eyes (I mean really, those contacts are very strong and very obvious, given Bardem's natural Spanish complexion). While I was watching the film I thought of Hugo Drax from Moonraker (1979, also with Roger Moore), but I think I had him mistaken for Zorin.

Add to that the home security threat - that the villain is not after world domination in so far as being a political conqueror or a businessman looking to monopolize markets for financial gain, etc., but rather he is on a revenge mission, terrorising not only what I think of as 'home' in the world of 007 but also 'home' in the real world, being MI6, the protector of Britain and Empire, and again I can't help but be reminded of Alec Trevelyan, missing-presumed-dead 006 in Goldeneye (1995, starring Brosnan as Bond, and my first experience... of the Bond franchise). And also, now that I think of it - 006 was a foreign-born agent, similar to Silvia; I did have this thought in the cinema and am only now remembering it, confusing the rules for MI6 agents with the rule for US Presidents, as in they are only eligible if they're born in the UK/US. AND ALSO, while I think of Goldeneye, the damsel-in-distress Bond girl in Skyfall (if you don't count Judi Dench as M), reminded me strikingly of Xenia Onnatop, particularly in her dress at the Macau gambling house, which is not surprising given that the actress Berenice Marlohe drew inspiration from Famke Janssen. And, not to dwell too much on the villains, but Silvia also has a prosthetic set of upper teeth that somehow restores his face to a natural look after it was ravaged by a cyanide pill than didn't kill him - what does prosthetic dentures remind me of...?

There are heaps of other throw-backs to the James Bond canon, both as a film franchise as well as Ian Fleming's novel series, that I won't go into in too much detail because a) it spoils the fun of finding them out for yourself and b) it'll take me all night - suffice it to say that there's many a knowing smirk to be had while watching Skyfall, and the references are done, like I said before, in a much better way than in Die Another Day, which was meant to also be a homage film. There's also a whole heap of new stuff, too: new Q, new Moneypenny, new M (come at me, Ralph Fiennes... though I shed a tear at the departure of Judi Dench, much-beloved), new direction in the wake of blockbuster action movies, particularly the Christopher Nolan Batman series (and again, some on the Internet have already made the comparison between Silvia and Heath Ledger's Joker), and new socio-cultural themes - here, and if you've seen the film already you'll know what I'm talking about. If you haven't, go and see it and find out for yourself! 

Finally, Daniel Craig as James Bond - being a fan of the Brosnan Bond, I was a little sceptical of a blond, squat, bulky Bond, physically worlds away from Fleming's image in the novels and what had been played to previously; however, the last two films of the 007 series and in particular this one just show that it's not always about appearances, and Craig's rendition of Bond is probably the closest any of them have come to the real thing in terms of characterisation - the grit of Tim Dalton but with the charm of Brosnan/Connery, and his own physicality, make him a great Bond and perhaps the best for the modern films. I didn't mind Bond (SPOILER ALERT) shedding a tear over M, which some critics have identified as being a bit soppy and not necessary, but I found it a touching reminder that while Bond is a cold-blooded killer, he's not a complete psychopath, and his cold heart is influenced somewhat by his fractured past. Judi Dench's final scenes were poignant and I think overall she played the role well - the criticism levelled at the female M in the last few films I feel are manifest in Skyfall, and she bows out after a fantastic performance in this film. 

So in summing up - you just have to see this film for yourself. Storyline's great, not too complicated or sickly, the perfect amount of terrorism, exoticism, 'romance' (as only Bond knows how, although there is some contention over whether Bond's seduction of Severine is an abuse of power over someone sexually abused), return of old stock characters, bidding farewell to a major character in the Bond canon, visually stunning and evocative (especially the scene between Bond and the man who tried to kill him, set in a Shanghai glass skyscraper with Chinese neon ads flashing everywhere). I would certainly see it again and I will definitely purchase it on DVD when it comes out in two weeks' time. 

Out of 5:
Five out of Five stars
(it's pretty bloody good!)

Wednesday, 21 November 2012

NaNoWriMo Day 21

A Milestone Day (for less than 1,000 words):

I finished the first Act, finally. 

I made it to 30,000 words, finally!

And, I have 101 pages of (semi-) presentable material - just have to churn out a bit more to begin Act II before I can get the beta readers onto the first part, and see whether it's worth continuing on, at least once I've hit the 50k goal. Tomorrow, I'll have about 7k worth of words to write to make par - I keep slipping further and further behind even though I dedicate more and more time to it; what gives?

As reward, I'm popping off to bed early - hoping for some inspiration to come in my dreams, perhaps?


NaNoWriMo Day 20

According to the NaNoWriMo stats page on my profile, I've written 3,562 words between 12:00am and 11:59pm today (Tuesday), bumping my total up to 29,570, yet again agonizingly short of the target word count of 33,333. 

Admittedly, a lot of it was filler - made-up conversations about restoring old cars, lists of chores done in one afternoon to try and preoccupy the FMC, an internal debate on whether the bath salts the FMC's daughter bought as a gift one Mother's Day/birthday/Christmas/etc. are strawberry-scented like it says on the jar, or more flowery-scented like a lavender aroma? 

Never mind. Despite all the prose, the plot's chugging along nicely, and I'm hoping to finish Act 1 if not tomorrow night then by Friday at the latest, leaving me a clean-ish slate to start Act 2 over the weekend. 

I had the thought today that I should compile a list of what songs I've been listening to while I've been writing on this particular project - I won't remember all of them now, but here's a few that spring to mind:

  • Frank Ocean's Channel Orange album (just about all of it, but the songs on heavy rotation are 'Monks', 'Sweet Life', 'Super Rich Kids', 'Bad Religion' [this one particularly poignant])
  • Lana Del Rey (yes, say what you will...), particularly 'Off to the Races', 'Blue Jeans', but especially 'Lolita' 
  • 'Seven Devils' by Florence + The Machine (but again that whole album Ceremonials is pretty good)
  • Ball Park Music's new one Museum
  • I was also listening to 'Time and a Word' by Yes off their Keys to Ascension live album, and every time I saw John Farnham's Ford ad, I've have to crank a bit of 'You're the Voice', or even worse, 'Touch of Paradise' (yes okay I admit it...)
Anyway, I'm off to bed, to rest and recharge ready for a new day (of work though, unfortunately), buoyed slightly with my better-than-average wordcount achieved for today. Hopefully in the next few days, with performances like these, will get me back onto par!


Sunday, 18 November 2012

NaNoWriMo Day 17

A pretty successful afternoon today, in comparison to my latest efforts, though still short of the 28,333 word target for Day 17. Never mind, that's still 3k more than I had last night.

Now that the clock's ticked over to midnight, Day 18, the target's bumped up to the big 3-0, 30k - so now I'm 5,100 behind. No matter, it's Sunday.

I've realised of late that my story's not going to be finished by the time I hit 50k, which is beyond what I was expecting to come out of this plot idea I'd saved for NaNo - it'll probably be more around the half-way mark, which is a good thing if I can pump out another 50k and make it a fuller-fledged novel draft upon which to work on for publication. When I'd attempted proper novels in my youth (after practicing with James Bond self-insert fanfiction, long before I knew what fanfiction was...), I would get to about 30k and either give up or finish the story, full still of gaping plot holes and horrible turns of phrase, probably. So it's nice to know that now, about twelve years on, I can get a story going and sustain it for as long as the publishing houses want it to go. I'm excited about the way it's developing, now that I've jumped a hurdle over the last 5-10,000 words where I thought I was never going to get to a good bit... now that I have, and I can get started on the next juicy bit, things are looking up.

And no, I won't say what the juicy bits are all about... best left to your imaginations!